LESSON 5 · Words That Win
Emails That Get Answered
The average executive receives 120+ emails daily and answers only a fraction. Boomerang's analysis of 350,000 email threads found patterns that lift response rates, including shorter subject lines, readable language, moderate length, balanced sentiment, and gratitude in sign-offs.
Other email tactics come from broader persuasion practice:
- "Thoughts?" can invite a low-friction reply
- "Because" works best when it introduces a real reason; Langer's copy-machine study found a boost for small favors, not a universal compliance button
- "By [specific date]" is clearer than "ASAP"
- "Your expertise" can flatter without being obvious when the expertise is real
Every word in a high-stakes email should be chosen with the precision of a headline writer.